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Every New Year holds promise, as though it is any different from the turn of
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As though bathed in full theatrical spotlight, Efe sat still on the little bed in his small quarters, while the officers pointed out the exact spot, they found the pashmina; under a throw pillow. Oladimeji and two of his field officers cramped into the room that had headroom comfortable only for a midget.
Oladimeji had twice knocked off the LED light fitting, affixed gingerly to the concrete ceiling with his head. He didn’t have so much of a problem bending over in the small room, while his team examined Efe’s room, he just couldn’t tolerate the stench of dried sweat and the filth that caused the room to stink to high heavens.
Standing outside, when they had refreshed their lungs outside by the pool, ridding it of the stench, Oladimeji faced Efe alone.
“Why do you have her scarf with you Efe. You can tell me.”
Efe looked incredibly sober. He kept a healthy distance from the inspector, hoping to evade a slap if it became necessary. He had received a couple already within 24hours since the lock down persisted, and he doubted he could survive another onslaught.
“I found it by the poolside after we found her body. I thought to keep it as memorabilia of our friendship. She was my friend.”
Oladimeji leaned in, “Did you jerk off on that scarf? We found faint traces of dried sperm.”
Efe kept quiet, his face serious as he looked ahead through the DSP as though he was invisible.
“You know you are a very disgusting, repulsive and revolting individual. What the hell got into you?” He swung his arm really hard aiming for his left cheek. Well-timed, but Efe had spent the whole time anticipating that very action and he was well prepared to duck the assault.
The sheer power in the missed swing almost caused the burly man to lose his balance. That even made him angrier, before one of the other officers stepped in to calm the situation down.
Frustrated, Oladimeji walked away from the scene. He had more serious issues to contend with. This spineless pervert and clumsy clodhopper is yet to grow enough balls to kill a chicken, let alone a grown woman; especially one that he seemed to be obsessed about.
Just as he approached the hotel building, it hit him, the pashmina. That smell. It wasn’t just her perfume. It had an ether-like odor with a slightly sweet taste.
He suddenly stopped in his tracks as he tried to recollect the exact name of the chemical.
Anyone watching him from a distance would imagine that he was struck by a sharp piercing headache as he racked his head desperately.
“Chloroform! Yes Chloroform. Trichloromethane.” He found his voice. There was no way he could forget that chemical. It was one of the oldest ways to knock anyone unconscious within seconds if inhaled in good enough dose, depending on how concentrated the dose was. Surely that could knock Onono out unconscious for up to an hour or more, before she was rolled into the pool to drown.
That pashmina was the murder weapon.
“That’s it.” He turned to face the pool area. Arrest that idiot.” Even if he wasn’t the killer, he was a pervert that deserved no mercy. Getting off on the scent of the victim and getting high at the same time was a sign of poor mental health.
Not only that, but he had also been all over the crime scene, with his footprint dotting every place, like a silly chump.
He was going to hang all the other crimes on his head when he was done finding the killer.
The killer had to be somewhere in the hotel.
“Do you have a chloroform spray bottle in your evidence box or any such bottle?” he got into a tizzy with an urgent bounce in his stride as he approached the fast-talking officer he had engaged earlier.
“Yes, we found a bottle that could have held the liquid, but we assumed it was used by the dry cleaners.”
“What is your name again Sergeant?” Oladimeji asked with an exaggerated calmness.
“Sergeant Pius, sir.”
“Now, look carefully in that box of yours, tell me where you found that bottle.”?
“Room 408.”
Both men searched each other’s face as they connected the dots. Suddenly a mad chase for the stairwell in the lobby started with Oladimeji and the other officers as they headed straight for the fourth floor.
They ran through the grand spaces of the expansive hotel lobby, that had an open invitation for the lungs to expand. They huffed past the stairwell in exhilarating blur as they stumbled on one another in a bid to get across the steps.
Oladimeji was left panting at the foot of the first floor. His bandy legs promised to collapse if he dared move at the pace of the younger officers.
“Shame on me.” He chided himself. He couldn’t imagine where he got the strength to run. It must be the adrenaline of finding a breakthrough in the case, he concluded.
He leaned on the rail of the staircase, heaving like he had just finished a sprint. All this effort lasted less than a minute. 45 seconds to be precise.
“It’s empty.” He heard the officers announce through the stairwell.
“Search the bloody room.” he managed to say, holding his left chest like it was about to spill its contents.
Catching his breath and a bit of his rational self, he realized that Glory had mentioned something about her boyfriend staying in that room; 408.
“Get me that receptionist called Glory immediately.” He screamed.
Another mad rush started as his officers raced down the stairwell and through the lobby in different directions in search of Oladimeji’s romantic interest.
“Bloody hell!” he muttered as he decided it was best to return to the manager’s office. But something didn’t feel quite right.
He was starting to feel dizzy and disoriented. He couldn’t move his feet until he collapsed into the thickest static of blackness, before rolling down the steps in a heap.
“Must be the food.” he muttered to himself as he went down.
“Glory! Glory!! Glory!!!” You would have thought there was a catholic hymnal chant in the hotel, as every officer on the premise including Nnamdi and a few of the hotel staff, searched for Glory in frenzy.
“Glory!!!”
***
Oladimeji was starting to open his eyes. He must have been out for twenty minutes. He could feel his stomach muscles straining and the thoughts in his head turned from fear to dizzy confusion.
At least he was alive, thankfully.
He spent the next few minutes retching everything he had gobbled down his throat that afternoon. Every morsel of meat and every drop of liquid that slithered down his throat. His mouth tasted raw and bitter.
“You were poisoned dear boss.” Sergeant Pius’ face peered into his as he tried to fill his lungs with air. It still felt like they weren’t even there as he braced himself up on his elbow.
“What happened?” he managed to say cleaning his lips with a saviet paper. “Where is that bitch?”
“We found her at the gate house trying to talk her way through the security personnel. She claimed you had permitted her to get something from the local market down the road.”
“Where is she? She tried to kill me. The little devil.” He coughed, as the pain became worse every time he spoke.
He looked at the wooden first aid box on the office table. All sort of pills and drug sachets had spilled from its belly. He shoved two pills down his throat quickly.
“Take it easy, Sir. We have her in our custody. You need to rest some more.” The sergeant pleaded subtly, showing genuine concern.
“There is no rest until this case is over. What did she put in my food?” He was in unimaginable pain. Every joint felt like they had been taken apart and strung together amateurly.
“We can not ascertain yet, but it wasn’t enough to put you out, sir.”
“Me!” He boasted wearing an awkward smile on his tired face. There was not enough energy to nod his head as usual. “You guys do not know me. Bring her in. I want to speak to her myself.”

Every New Year holds promise, as though it is any different from the turn of

Adaeze had been awake since 4 a.m.
Not because she was anxious — though she was — but because this trip felt different. After eighteen months of follow-ups, phone calls, and PowerPoint presentations polished to a mirror shine, the deal was finally ready to close. An investor meeting in Abuja. A partnership that would change the trajectory of her small but gutsy consulting firm. She had triple-checked her flight, her documents, her outfit. She had prayed. She was ready.

When he told his father, Dare’s first response was a sigh. Then: “I told you to practice more. I told you months ago. You don’t listen. You never listen.”
There was no “I’m sorry, son.” No pause to let the boy simply feel the loss of the thing he wanted. Just a swift, seamless pivot to what Temi had done wrong — and, by extension, how Temi’s failure was evidence of Temi’s failure to take his father’s wisdom seriously.

I want to tell you something that took me embarrassingly long to learn. Not because the idea is complicated — it is not. But because it cuts against something deeply wired in us, something we are rarely honest enough to admit.

You are somewhere between forty and fifty-five. You looked in the mirror recently and had a thought you immediately dismissed. Maybe you googled something at 2am that you would never say out loud. Maybe you bought something expensive and impractical and told everyone it was an investment. Or maybe you just feel — quietly, persistently — like the life you built was supposed to feel better than this by now.

Anton Chekhov was a Russian physician and playwright — a man trained in the discipline of diagnosis before he became one of the most precise storytellers in the history of world literature. That combination of sensibilities matters, because the principle he articulated in the late nineteenth century was not merely a rule of dramatic craft. It was an observation about the nature of significance itself. About what it means for something to be present. About the relationship between introduction and consequence.

There is a prison that has no concrete walls, no iron bars, no guards posted at the gate. Nobody built it for you. Nobody sentenced you to it. And yet, for many people, it is the place they spend the better part of their lives — circling its perimeter, brushing their fingers against its invisible boundaries, and quietly retreating each time they feel the edge of something that might require more of them than they believe they can give.

Picture a hand holding sand. The tighter the grip, the faster the grains escape between the fingers. Ease the grip — open the palm, allow the hand to become a vessel rather than a vice — and the sand stays. This is one of the oldest paradoxes of leadership, and one of the least learned: that control, pursued too aggressively, produces the very loss of control it was designed to prevent.

There is a version of ambition that builds. And there is a version of ambition that consumes. From a distance — and especially from inside it — they look almost identical. Both are energetic. Both are forward-moving. Both speak the language of vision and possibility. The difference only becomes visible later, usually at the point of fracture, when what was built begins to come apart under the weight of what was promised.

There is a particular kind of organisational absurdity that most people who have ever worked in a company will recognise immediately. It is the policy that was clearly designed by someone who has never had to implement it. The restructuring that looked elegant on a slide deck and chaotic on the ground. The customer-facing process that was overhauled by a committee that has not spoken to a customer in years. The directive that arrives from above, fully formed and non-negotiable, that causes the people closest to the work to exchange a look — the kind of look that says, without words: they have no idea what we actually do here.

We have built an entire mythology around exhaustion. In boardrooms and business culture — perhaps nowhere more so than in the high-pressure, always-on professional culture many of us inhabit — busyness has become a currency. To be tired is to be serious. To be overwhelmed is to be important. To be burning out, quietly, is somehow proof that you are fully committed.

There is a particular kind of failure that never makes the headlines. It does not arrive with a scandal, a public collapse, or a dramatic resignation. It builds slowly, almost imperceptibly, in the space between what a leader sees and what they choose to say. It lives in the meetings that end without the real conversation ever starting. It grows in the silence after a poor decision goes unchallenged, not because nobody noticed, but because everyone agreed — unspokenly — that it was simply easier not to say anything.

The boardroom at Crescent Capital Partners on Victoria Island smelled of leather and ambition — the kind that had been earned, aged, and perhaps left out a little too long. Emeka Osei-Bello, Managing Director and Group CEO, sat at the head of a long mahogany table, his charcoal suit immaculate, his posture the kind that says, I built this. He had, in many ways, done exactly that.

When you stay loyal to a version of yourself that no longer exists—the one who was hurt, the one who failed, the one who was overlooked—you are still choosing. You are choosing to let one moment in time define the whole arc of your life. And that choice costs more than it keeps.
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I knew it, captivating
Lol….. You had the pleasure of reading the whole novella in one fell swoop
Insightful and captivating. Welldone broo
Thanks alot Hafees
Hmmmmm… Glory!!!!! You are finished o. So many loose ends. Hope they would be tied together in the last episode. Chai! This suspense is killing.
I apologize for this suspense. How do we resolve
Infatuation got the better of Oladimeji, he took too much risk eating from a potential killer. I hope it doesn’t turn into a full regret.
The power of woman!
Like I knew it has to do with this naughty glory. What game is she playing? Something seems odd. Suspicious